If you say it’s erotic I want to be blushing by chapter 3 & it better be FILTH.- Je suis Fatty-Gay ApDid she ask you to critique her writing from high school? Nothing upsets me more than a book being labeled erotic but it not having sex through out. Instead of leaving well enough alone, he decides to … critique her old story?!Īlso I’m upset that OP called it erotic writing but then said it only had sex in the end. It’s too late now, though, and he’s gone ahead to read her high school romantic work of fiction.

Even if it was, like, a school paper and not something she wrote for fun, he should’ve asked before reading it. We find out that this is a personal story she wrote-as to be expected when it’s a, quote, “erotic” piece written by a teenager (unless you’re reckless like me and passing around your smutty DBZ fanfic in class for the other students to read).